how mnay pillls can youtake to shut it out?
to sleep sleep it off sleep it away sleep forever
but i want to be alive
but i guess this is not possible anymore.
i'm asleep and i'm dead.
an dthe world around me the time around me the words around me they turn they swirl it makes nos sense
because i haven't been there
i haven't done that
Put a hammer to my head if necessary
make it all stop from turning.
I was a different me yesterday.
Beware, even when you've been there and done that it still doesn't make sense some of the time.
ReplyDeleteA lovely, punchy piece.
Love
Malcolm
Never makes sense, right, and i'm a fool for searching for it. I'm not sure i know what punchy means. Does it come from 'punch'?
ReplyDeleteThankyou, good friend and kind sire
Db
when is enough ever enough?
ReplyDeletetough one that
Liked this piece a lot
Nick
When we die, i guess that will be enough and anywaya it willbe too late for more. Sad. Scary.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nick, i may be having a very quiet nervous breakdown unlike those noisy messes i had bee going through before.
I like every piece you write, it gets better and more mature with every new installment, and I wonder, just wondering, are there any specific influences, cause i just read a bit Guyotat and made me think of you. It says somewhere: I torture because he tortures, he tortures because they torture.
Just a thought i had to share.
respect my man
DB
Oh yes, it comes from punch, the knid of punch that hurts even when you invite it
ReplyDeleteLove
Malcolm
LOL, that sounds good then :)
ReplyDeleteAll the love
DB